"there are many wonderful features of this paper: you have a pointed and significant thesis, you have some nice insights, and provide great qutoations. you don't, however, argue most of your points adequately... there is so much potential here."

underlining wasn't mine, but the professor's. i read this and i just thought she was writing about my life, and not a paper. pretty neat. i think i assume people know too much and so i skip over details that are important. whenever i write an "overdetailed paper" (in my opinion), i tend to get better grades. hehe.

i changed the style sheets a little. i think i'm gonna make the font a little bigger. maybe different. but not changing the entire site quite yet.

a poll thing may come here soon. and then we will see how many people are really reading what i say. hehe.

maybe i just shouldn't test you guys...