eating or dancing?
chad says dancing, but we are
not blind and stupid
a haiku for chad
1219-october16-2003
comments
re: bad chad!
from: niv (2003-10-16 16:00:08)
my haiku was good,
but how long before geoff joins
this haiku party?
re:
from: geoff (2003-10-16 16:33:29)
i am back for class
how could the party begin
without my presence?
re:
from: geoff (2003-10-16 16:35:15)
i meant to say "from"
and not "for" as was written
i apologize
re: stop cheatin on the title, stupid
from: niv (2003-10-16 16:35:52)
chad was arguing
about how much he likes to eat
silly silly silly chad. whee!
re:
from: geoff (2003-10-16 16:37:15)
i cant believe that
i called niv at 3 last night
the news was shocking!
re: urs's birthday
from: urs (2003-10-16 16:44:31)
it is my birthday
the big two-two i turn today
horray for me
:-)
re: not to break character
from: niv (2003-10-16 18:51:37)
urs, since today is 2 syllables, your haiku isn't really a haiku.. unless you break up to-day and then maybe
its 5-8-4 right now... very poor
re: apologies
from: urs (2003-10-17 01:57:18)
very sad. my first haiku that i dared to write on elscorcho and i messed it up. go figured. i tried hard to count syllables and all. i of course got it wrong. i thought it was the total number of syllables that really counted, but what do i know about poetry really? i guess i better not be an english teacher.
re: ha
from: bbb (2003-10-20 14:16:52)
haikus are funny
urs that was a real good try
niv don't be a poop
re: asking too much
from: chad (2003-10-20 15:23:00)
bbb asks niv
not to be a poop but we
know he can't do that
re: bad poetry
yes, food outranks dance
but dance is still better than
nirav's bad haiku